My last summer!!

Hi I'm Laia and I'm going to tell you about my last summer.

My summer has been in three villages: Banyoles, l'Escala and l'Estartit. Earlier this summer I was in Banyoles. After that I went to l'Escala. And finally I went to l'Estartit.

Banyoles:

In Banyoles I was with my friends. We went going to the beach, the pool, the lake... And we hard parties in park “la Draga”. Perfect nights.

L'Escala:

After that I went to l'Escala with my father, sister, brother and others. There were the best days summer. Beacause I met people who are very special to me. I hope I you can find them next year. I love it the french. They are perfect.

L'Estartit:

And finally, I went to l'Estartit with Helena and Mireia's apartment. Everyday we went to the beach and the pool. And party. But the summer in 2012, was much better. Because I was with my best friend every day, and I met somebody incredible.

MY LAST SUMMER HOLIDAYS!!:)

Hi, my name's is Laia and now I'm going to talk about my last summer. My last summer was very good. First, I was in to Jonquera for nine days, in a summer camp with my best friends. Second I come back to Banyoles with Júlia, and finally I went to Montseny with Georgina and Marina.

NINE DAYS IN JONQUERA

This summer I went for nine days to Jonquera in a summer camp. It was great! Every day we did different activities. I could make new friends. In the evening we did the night activity such as horror night, or a film or a game... And the food was pretty good.

BANYOLES

When I returned from Jonquera I went out with my friends almost every day, in the lake or the park of la Draga. We went, for two days in “Festes del Tura” with Júlia, Esther and Núria. It was a great evening!

MONTSENY

We went to the Montseny for one week with my cousin Georgina and my sister Marina. It was a great week! One day we went to the beach Mataró. And the other day we were in the pool with friends. I'll never forget that week!!

This was my summer this year. Any questions?

THANKS FOR YOUR ATTENTION.

OBSERVATION OF MY ORAL PRESENTATION

PRESENTATION:

-Did you use any resources? I used a power point.

-Were the resources relevant and attractive? They were with many pictures, but nice.

-Did you show/talk about the photos to the audience? Not much.

BODY LANGUAGE AND EYE CONTACT: 

-Did you look at your audience most of the time? I did not watch much public.

-Did you read from your notes? All the time.

-Did you do any gestures/movement to hold the attention of you audience? Not many.

STRUCTURE:

-Did you organize your ideas in order of importance? Yes.

-Did you use discourse markers to make your ideas more clear? Yes.

(first, then, secondly, on the one hand, on the other hand, finally...) 

-WHICH ONES?  First, then, second and finally.

CONTENT:

-Did you introduce interesting information to your audience? Not many.

-Did you look up information/facts/ideas in the internet/books..? Ideas in the internet.
-Was your information more superficial or more detailed and original? More detailed and original.


LANGUAGE: 

-Did you check your grammar? Yes.

-Did you use rich/new vocabulary looking up the dictionary? NO.

-Did you use sentence linkers?(and,but,moreover,also,furthermore,although,however...) Not many.

-Did you use fillers? (well, you know, for example, one second, repeating a word...) Not many.

PRONUNCIATION & INTONATION:

-Did you know how to pronounce all your words? Yes.

-Did you check the pronunciation with dictionary, a classmate or the teacher? Yes, with a classmate.

-Did you change your tone of voice or use a monotone all the time? No.

-Did you speed in a fluid continuum or with breaks and interruptions? All at the same speed.

  

You are your teacher! What mark did you get? ;)  5.